On tuesday it was big splash after morning .tea we came inside and got changed after we got changed we went to the pool it was the girls tern they were doing freestyle when the first race started they said ready... set... go !!! they all jumped in to the water and room 19 started scheming go room 19 !!!!! the first lona came first in the first race and she went to the finals after the girls tern it was the boys tern Kenz and sat down at the pool whol and mr folder said ready...set… go!!! we all said lets go Kenz lets go and Kenz came first and he went to the finals and then it was the second row it was Elijah tern he sat down on the whole mr folder said ready...set...go!!! Elijah jumped into the pool and room 19 jumped up and down and saying lets go Elijah let go everybody was so excited and then it was the backstroke it was the girl tern again it was the first row it lona tern she hopped into the pool and mr foulder said ready...set...go!!! lona was in the lead and she came first and she went in to the finals after the backstroke and then mr bennett said the points and we came first our points were 97 points and we were calibrated and scheming.
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ReplyDeleteHi Christopher you document was really good. I really liked it because it was very simple and easy to read and understand. But I think you should work on making your sentences make sense and also knowing how to spell some words properly before you publish it and I think if you work on those your work will be perfect.
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